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So this is my sad attempt at a doctor who fan fiction. I don’t have a lot of time to write a long story, so for now…this is kind of a narrative. Enjoy.

The Girl and the Unicorn

(Scene opens with the doctor and clara discussing possible worlds to visit. Every suggestion this “new” doctor gives is too…boring…for clara)

“Ok…there is this planet where the atmosphere is laughing gas…” clara rolls her eyes. “I want to go somehwere at least a little bit girly for a change. I want so see…” clara looks into the T.A.R.D.I.S. monitor, clearly addressing her. “I want to see a unicorn.” “That’s rubbish. Unicorns are rubbish. Just horses wi…” and without warning clara grabs the handle, pulls it down and the T.A.R.D.I.S  takes off. Clara looks at the doctor and smiles.

(Insert opening credits here)

The T.A.R.D.I.S. has landed on a strange and odd colored world. Clara steps out and giggles. “At least she goes where I tell her.” “You know, ever since you two made peace I feel like a bit of a third wheel.” “Oh hush. Its a girl thing. She understands.”

(This where I just start describing stuff. My story telling time is short and I don’t want to forget it)

The begin to explore the planet and the doctor is growing more and more uneasy about this planet. As dusk approaches they head back to the T.A.R.D.I.S. As they go a man runs across their path. Then another. And a woman. They follow.  Once they catch up they discover its a hunting expidition but one of them is missing. As they head toward the T.A.R.D.I.S. to search out the missing hunter, the doctor stops. He notes that there is only one sun. One source of light but one of the hunters has two shadows.

The hunter begins to freak out and while calming him he asks if the missing hunter was dead. They tell him they don’t know. He was just gone. The doctor apologizes to the hunter and tells him there’s nothing he can do. The hunter runs toward the clearing but as he does the shadow covers him and consumes him, leaving behind nothing but bone. Clara is as shaken as the hunters so the doctor explains about vashta narada.

As they approach the tardis the doctor tells everyone to stay back and stay in the light. The T.A.R.D.I.S has two shadows. Through some work and sonic screwdrivery the doctor gets the swarm away from the T.A.R.D.I.S. and they enter. They try to flee but she won’t start. Something is draining the energy.

The doctor says thr must leave to find what is causing it, but they take lights and arm themselves against the vashta narada. As they walk through the forest they come to an ancient temple. The team heads in, hoping to find their missing person. As the doctor follows, clara notes the beautiful carvings. The doctor kind of puts it off and tells here to hurry up. He is concerned about the vashta narada still. In the temple they find the missing person. Dead. But dead of old age. The doctor is very confused. The vashta would have just eaten him. Not trapped him. Then he sees it. The temple is not a normal temple. Its an altar. Surounded with statues. Statues covering their faces. “Ohh that’s not good. Not at all.”

With no time to explain, the doctor orders everyone to stand back to back and slowly walk out of the temple. the hunters insist on staying. they want to find out what happened to their missing man. the doctor realizes that one of the angels is looking right at them and pointing into the shadows. he shines a light into the darkness and sees an angel. it has written a message on the wall. “HELP US, DOCTOR”

To be continued in “the enemy of my enemy”